Saturday 25 April 2015

5 sentence stories - Lollie

Hello Earthlings, welcome back to another post from me, one day late... I'm sorry

Yesterday, while sat in McDonalds, my sister was telling me about this things she's doing in school called 5 sentence stories. The first sentence must start with 'Once Upon a Time',  the second must start with 'One day', the third must start with 'Unfortunately', the fourth must start with 'Luckily' and the last one must start with 'Eventually'. Overall, the story must end with 'The End'.

So, I thought I'd try and give it a go and see what I could come up with:

Once Upon a Time, there was a mad man in a box called The Doctor. One Day, he landed in London and met a girl called Rose Tyler. Unfortunately, London was being taken over by plastic autons disguised as window shop dummies and Rose and The Doctor got captured. Luckily, Rose had gotten her bronze gymnastic medal and she managed to knock the anti plastic into the nesteen consciousness, killing all the plastic autons. Eventually, they saved the world and The Doctor invited Rose to go travelling in Time and Space with him and here, I would usually write 'The End' but for them, it was only just the beginning...

So in this story I basically managed to described the events of 'Rose' in 5 sentences. Now here's 'The Eleventh Hour' in 5 sentences:

Once Upon a Time, there was a a young Scottish girl who lived in Ledworth named Amelia Pond. One day, a raggedy man in a blue box, landed in her garden and ate fish fingers and custard with her in her kitchen. Unfortunately, he went away, he promised her only 5 minutes - he was wrong, he took 12 years to come back and when Amelia told everyone about this raggedy man, no one believed her and they dismissed him as an imaginary friend. Luckily, the raggedy Doctor returned to her, 12 years later than he promised, but still in time to save the world from the Atraxi and prisoner zero and to try and take care of the crack in Amy's wall. Eventually, The Doctor got rid of them and he saved the planet, inviting Amelia to come travelling with him, just one trip she said as in the morning, she had something important to do.

My next story is my own:

Once Upon a Time there lived a princess who was told she couldn't do anything other than what her title entitled her to do. One day, she crept out of the castle (which was forbidden), to explore the near by village in which her father ruled over. Unfortunately, while she was outside of the castle walls, she stumbled across some rather rude individuals - no one said hello or smiled at her in the street as her books had foretold. Luckily, the princess did meet one girl who said hello and smiled and was incredibly polite to her, she explained to the princess that times had changed since those books had been written and lots of people had become hostile and rude. Eventually, the princess returned to her castle, exhausted and a little confused at the contents of her escapade, wondering if she would ever be able to go back to a time when people weren't so cold and hard and shut off from everybody else.

I feel like these five word sentences are a great way to review movies or tv shows or episodes and books so I might try to do that in the future...

Sorry it's been short but -
Until Next Time - Allons-y!
Lollie x



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